Beatitudes

I am reading A Chosen Faith and their is an exercise to rewrite the Beattitudes for yourself. Here iss what I wrote.  First here are the original Beatitudes. 

Matthew 5:3-12

Blessed are the poor in spirit, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.
Blessed are those who mourn, for they will be comforted.
Blessed are the meek, for they will inherit the earth.
Blessed are those who hunger and thirst for righteousness, for they will be filled.
Blessed are the merciful, for they will receive mercy.
Blessed are the pure in heart, for they will see God.
Blessed are the peacemakers, for they will be called children of God.
Blessed are those who are persecuted for righteousness’ sake, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.

Here are mine:

Blessed are the poor in spirit, for they will knnow peaceuuuu8.
Blessed are those who mourn, for they will be comforted.
Blessed are the meek, for they will be accepted.
Blessed are those who hunger and thirst for righteousness, for they will be filled.
Blessed are the merciful, for they will receive mercy.
Blessed are the pure in heart, for they will find answers to the Mystery.
Blessed are the peacemakers, for they will be called one with the Universe.
Blessed are those who are persecuted for righteousness’ sake, for they will know freedom.